I could have shown where Luck was standing better. Especially in the 4th panel, Nine does actually hit him in the face with her elbow. Also it is unclear that she is pressing the cross against his hand in the 5th panel. The style is still really sketchy, but yeah, my pen was giving up. Luck's pose in the big panel makes me laugh, he looks like he's doing ballet. XD Anyway, the page overall isn't too bad I guess. Enjoy.
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