Doujinshi Improvement
Lucky number Nine - p24

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Lucky number Nine - p24

Ryjia
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I think I did a good job on the panels, I really like the set-up of the page. Compare it to earlier pages, you see I have indeed improved, so my goal's reached. I really like the fangs and Luck's nose (though a tad on the big side) in the third panel. I really like the eyes as well and the last panel looks really good to my eyes. The only things I really don't like are the cross and the 6th panel.
And about the story, nope, I just don't do happy endings.

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