Drachronon
1-10 Alone Again

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1-10 Alone Again

stinger9
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Among changes here, no copy pasted background, minor dialogue tweaks, and just one rock on that spot instead of a load of rubble (Felt a little better from a focus standpoint!)
One thing that did get removed was the line Implying she took some time to dig her way to the surface. Honestly, it just didn't feel right, even trying to word it differently didn't pan out. Still canon, it'll still gets mentioned later, just couldn't find a way of including it here that I liked!

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