I like the overall look of this page better than the last one, and we're caught back up with Skate Dude now, but I'm not so sure about the text. I write this one as I go along with a general outline, unlike Fatal Twilight which I write far in advance and then tweak the text until it's perfect. Oh well. You're thoughts are always appreciated!
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