Page description: Outside, the one authority figure is about ready to send in the command to stop the so-called terrorist plot AND the peeps who called in the fake Terrorist attack tip, when the top floor, the floor of the CEO goes BOOM, shattering glass everywhere, where he tells his men to fall back. Meanwhile, back at the ranch, er, I mean, inside the factory, a large Nick holds on with one hand, as Penny hands onto his leg, as the sweater is in the bleach below… with Penny stating she can reach it.
Commentary: Wow. This page was a LOT of fun to do. While this page was fun, this and the next few pages *are* rather tedious, but I think it pays off. It was once said I never really show, I tell, and this is one of those times I wanted to use the critque to good use. While it doesn't really show here, the next few pages, you might say, I could of easily just not of drawn it out as much as I did, and I'm sure initially, in order to keep the page length down, the script of this issue was shortened down. When I realized that I need to show AND tell equally, or at least, try to to the best of my ability (I will admit lately a few times I've gotten lazy or stupid in some instances), this scene coming up in particular was really important. I wish I could really tell you what was going to happen here at the end, cos, really, this chapter really is the end of the story, per se. Chapter 6 is more of an "epilouge" than anything, and I think really caps off a long journey for not only the characters, but for me as well. Until next time…
enjoy.
**UPDATE** I fixed a continunity error. I'm slowly getting better about this stuff, folks. Sorry about that.
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