Page description: Penny's hand is barely hold on. As Nick makes one final plea, her hand is gone, and she falls, creating a slpash into the hot boiling bleach. Of course, her skin begins to disappear, giving the way to blood dillutting the bleach, as one final attempt, Penny yoinks the sweater, in her hand, in the air as she goes down to her chemically doomed fate.
Commentary: As much as I liked the previous page, this page for me popped in pencils, but loses something in my translation. Maybe it was because I finished this as I watched my Ohio State Buckeyes slaughtered by the Gators. Don't get me wrong but damn. I wasn't expecting this at all. I suck at following sports, I do, but c'mon. To quote Homer Simpson, I was constantly going "You know I don't pray alot, but Superman, if you're listening, I'm sorry and please save my Buckeyes". Jeesh.
But the slaughter of the OSU Buckeyes aside, this page, while disappointing I suppose,at the same time, is another page closer to the end of this chapter, which I just can't wait to show you all. The end of this chapter is simply action packed and really is a nice cap on things, as not only will it be cool, it will be totally making you go "wtf?" at the same time as we lead into "Chapter 6", which is the epilogue. Okay, I'm done. (finishes to watch the final death nell of OSU at the championship game.)
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