Elemental Heir Redux

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Legendholyangel

on March 8, 2011

I finally made it :D
this took me two days to make ^^'
I remade the claws, however with some more space.
I made another display of the evil one ont he seocnd panel, and I've reduced the shocked face on the third panel by an isolated close up on his eyes. And I added a chibi-ness thing.
First time I tried making it, so it might not look too well really ^^' but I hope you will enjoy it ^^ However, I am quite satisfied with my improvement. Please people, if you see this,
could you please comment with your advice, compliments, critics?

tyvm ^^

LHA