Elijah and Azuu

#1253 Many Problems: Gets Away

on May 16, 2007

Pacing is really hard to get down right. It's a difficult balance between making a story go quickly without seeming rushed, and taking the time to make everything make sense without making it boring and slow. It's giving me quite a bit of trouble with this story arc, because in a way I just want things to GO, but I know I need to flesh out the story a bit more. Either way, I kind of enjoy the back and forth between Elijah and Michael, even if it's not as funny as when he's hanging out with Azuu.

Anyway, despite my lack of regular internet, I have at least next week taken care of, so no worries on that front.

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