Emma

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Miruku

on March 26, 2006

Wee. Tried a different way to color the same style this time. Much faster! Hurrah. Hopefully cleaner, as well.

BTW, I have put in vote incentives until the end of April on Buzzcomix. If you feel the urge to vote, please do so!

New improvements for Jenna to make in the next 20 pages. AKA things I will be trying to do better- more line width variance, better anatomy, work out the color scheme a teensy bit more (just tweak it a bit and I think it'll be perfect), and take even more time on my backgrounds. Why do I say these things? To remind myself! I've been doing really well at improving exactly what I've meant to, so I'm gonna stay on that path. Every time I get reviewed, I have to weigh what my critiques say very carefully to figure out what I think will work best for the story. I just got some great advice over at the webcomic list, from 2 very different opinions, so I'm noting them here.

BTW, to avoid confusion, Jenna=Miruku, in case you hadn't figured that one out.