I really don't like this page now that I've finished it. Too late to get rid of it or change it (unfortunately). It doesn't really do much for the story…it was meant to point out that Theo totally doesn't remember Emma from the first chapter and for him to find out (oh so sneakily) whether she was renting or what (which is continued on the next page). Soo, slightly informative, I guess, but it's not terribly important information, aside from the fact that the background looks like teh shit.
Oh well, The next page is much prettier. I think this whole chapter kinda got away from me writing-wise, as excited as I was about it. Mer.
Thanks to you guys for sticking with me through the slow update schedule! I wish I could do something about it…
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