Not my best page, I will readily admit. Again, my feelings on this are more along the lines of "yeah, but it's a page" than "maaaybe I should redo it."
And I'm giving myself some slack since I'm 3 months out of practice. I have to get back into the habit, and at least the storyline is progressing.
This page is almost wholly for the benefit of the people, of whom there are apparently many, that don't remember how Alicey fits into the story at all. Remember the blonde chick? With the freckles and the horrible child? Remember how that child is Theo's niece, meaning Alicey is his sister? Yes? Please? Why does no one remember!?
Anyway, expect the next page no earlier than next weekend, as I have already procrastinated enough as it is. And, if it comes sooner, all the better.
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