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Fusion #4 Page 9

EssayBee

on Sept. 6, 2010

Here's page 9 of Fusion #4. Flow of this page is a bit choppy. Flow made sense when I scripted, but after looking at it, I think it could've probably used another panel or two of transitions. Hopefully the actions make sense even without those transitions.

Also, I know the proper term is "crosshairs" (plural), but the singular makes more sense for a character name–at least to me.