Had trouble deciding if I should make Dora curse. Wanted to express her intense anger at the moment. Filthy stinkin motherfucker was the least amount of words I could think of to express her anger. PLUS a visual of her mother Maria Linn getting her throat slit. Plus spirals in her eyes to illustrate the insanity of her rage. What do you guys think, Pissed enough? lol
Printed book of Chamber One coming soon! Scroll down to the Forum button for details on extras and my plans for the printed version of Eternal.
Also, if you're enjoying what you're reading, please rate, leave me a hello how are ya or something :) More on the way! :D-GIO
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