Explosion Proof
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Explosion Proof 3 - Page 3
mattchee onWell, judging from last weeks comments, everyone digs the cars, so I think all my hard work on those has paid off. And you still got three more pages of it after this one! Not quite as many up close car shots this week (some fun car action next week, though), but that last panel is one of my favorites.
That panel, I actually labored over the dialog a bit because I think I had something that really fit it, but about midway through putting this story together, I re-wrote the second half, and thus had to re-dialog some of the first half to match up. That's how it goes. If you're curious, the reason being was that I had kinda took the "data cube" adventure a bit further than I had planned, and I really felt that I needed to wrap that up a bit and either move on, or take a break from EP altogether.
Soo… what was I talking about? Oh right, that last panel. Anyway, I felt that panel was such a good classic adventure story type of panel, I really wanted to make sure that the dialog had the right amount of punch to it. I think I succeeded.
Anyhow… that's it for this week. Chugging a along, getting my print obligations hammered out– most of that is almost all in the can, just waiting for a couple items to come in.
Thanks for reading and commenting everyone, I shall see you all in a weeks time!
–matt
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