FIGHT

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mlai

on Aug. 27, 2007

This page drawn by Ed Bangalan. Read the sister series FIGHT 2, which follows a different group of characters in the same world.

When I said in F2's commentary that F1's setting doesn't have as much presence, I wasn't remembering clearly. F1's nature is just as important, if not more. Particularly in the next 2 pages, when we use a clever (if I do say so myself) storytelling device which we would not have thought of if we weren't following the monthly mystery phrases.
I think, maybe F1 and F2's settings currently reflect the nature of each story's mood and character.