FIGHT

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Page 124

mlai

on Dec. 11, 2008

This page by Ed. His part for this chapter is done. Now I'll finish up the rest.

The past 2-3 pages needed so much editing because it was important to capture the reactions of the men. I didn't realize this until after Ed showed me the first attempts, so it's my fault as well. I didn't verbalize what I knew. I wanted there to be Confusion -> Realization -> Fear, which are important because it is the introduction to [Him]. Ed didn't know that.

The companion comic FIGHT 2, by me and Edbang: