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Chapter 22 page 04

mlai

on Jan. 30, 2019

Posted by edbang

Art by edbang, story by mlai, justnopoint, edbang

This page went through 8 iterations before coming out. 1 major redraw, meaning the page was restructured panel wise, and 7 minor changes, where panel layout is the same, it's just the content is tweaked a bit.

The first attempt had 5 panels, and the small revisions were mostly the two panels at the top regarding facial expressions and body language.

Usually mlai, justnpoint and I discuss it until either we get something we're happy with or I'm just fed up with making changes. 8 iterations is pretty much the max times I'm willing to discuss it until I just want to go to the next page.

drawn on a Lenovo yoga book YB1-X91F using clip studio paint pro