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chapter 23 page 16

mlai

on July 3, 2019

posted by edbang

art by edbang, story by mlai, justnopoint and edbang

whups! Sorry this is posted a little later than intended, since I committed to posting every wednesday until our page queue is exhausted, but it gives a chance to say Happy Independence day to our American friends!

I'm on vacation and just travelled to Rhode Island, and realized I forgot to queue up some pages before I left. Oh, the trials of the procrastinator!

So this page is pretty odd for me. I'm starting to get good at visualizing the space and have pretty good control of what I want to see, still not perfect, but I'm finding my sketchiness is starting to look less sketchy. I've actually had to mess up this page to make it look more sketch on purpose to get the effect I wanted. Weird.

Before I had to fight to get the shapes I wanted, since I was less confident, didn't have a proper methodology, and my art was naturally sketchy to begin with, but now I had to fight to make it more sketchy.

Then there's the kind of sketchiness I wanted. The kind I wanted here was to make it look like it's a bit unfinished. Rough. Unconfident, like Abbot wasn't 100% sure he was remembering things correctly.

Next page should come out on time. Hopefully. I'll queue it up after I come back from vacation. I hope I remember this time! And yes I know I can queue it up in advance, but unless I'm procrastinating I feel I have nothing good to say. :p

drawn on a yoga book Lenovo YB1-X91F, windows 10, v1809, Clip Studio Paint Pro