FIGHT

Chapter 23 page 17

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Chapter 23 page 17

mlai
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posted by edbang

art by edbang, story by mlai, justnopoint and edbang

Yep. I can see Abbot's running is a little awkward, but I kinda like it. It definitely shows all the cool details of the body. In the end i don't know whether it is out of laziness, or because I like how it looks, but I just kept it as is. I think it is mostly out of fear I can't re-capture the feeling of urgency you get from when I initially drew it.

I kinda get now why you shouldn't fully render a piece until you are happy with the rough. For the longest time I started with rendering the head and if that was ok I'd draw the rest. I think I finally have enough skill and confidence to rough out a drawing and fight the page to something close to what I imagined. I almost feel like I used to be a caveman in my earlier drawings.

This is probably my favorite page out of the chapter because of the running action. Lots of motion. It was really fun to draw.

drawn on a yoga book Lenovo YB1-X91F, windows 10, v1809, Clip Studio Paint Pro

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