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Chapter 24 page 06

mlai

on Nov. 6, 2019

posted by edbang

art by edbang, story by mlai, justnopoint and edbang

Welp this is the last page for a while. We have nothing left in the queue. I can promise to continue to work on new pages, but they'll come out as they are finished. Argh, I kinda liked the consitency of posting every week, but that is no longer possible.

if anyone wants to contribute some pages feel free to pm edbang

ok. On to commentary. Artwise I'm pretty happy with the page. Mlai and justnopoint had major issues with the composition, but I stubbornly said I like these floating heads, disjointed middle element and weird pillar thing in the middle. I think it just brings everyone for a nice journey around the page. Mlai suggested then bottom half, with those two characters sitting in those positions. Originally they were just standing around looking into the camera. Big improvement! Thanks mlai!

As for the story, mlai said these girls are not putting Recca in the center of their attention. They are part being polite, but more importantly doing the work they need to do, and don't have much time to focus on her. They call her Seaworld because it makes more sense to them… lol to me it looks more like bullying like in Mean Girls, but I think there is supposed to be a twist here to that.

drawn on a yoga book Lenovo YB1-X91F, windows 10, v1903, Clip Studio Paint Pro