This update took an even longer while, because Mlai "wanted to have fun," and started getting addicted to a certain PC game which sucked up all free time. Ed's actually making buffer pages faster than me, which is not a good sign.
The bottom half of this page is pretty busy. I try to use the grays to my advantage, but it may still be too busy. :p
@ RoyceMarie (and everyone else too): Thanks for commenting on F1 and F2. F2 is a more intimate, less campy story. Both are pretty dark stories, just that it's less lonely in F1 right now because they have 4 ppl clowning around.
As for a break for F2's pair… that'll be a while… this is a long chapter. But it's actually almost completely drawn. Once we get thru Ed's half (which I'm helping with, like with this page), we get to my half which I've already finished months ago. :D
So no one need worry about me flaking out and leaving you hanging. ;)
Read the companion comic FIGHT 1; both stories take place in the same world.
Edit: After considering EEN's crit, I added motion-blur background and more epic SFX to panel 4. Does look better. Thought about doing the same for last panel… but that panel has too many stray lines and would just be so much tedious work with Photostudio program… I felt my time is better directed to the next page…
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