This page by me. Good correlation between F1 and F2… the page theme for both is pants! If you thought Nuada was acting questionably last page, get a load of this one, muweheheheh…!
I'll be crossing a line in this chapter (a little bit). I don't care about the T+ rating, but I really needed to be sure whether it's in good taste. I care about the characters. So I asked Edbang's opinion; I figured "He goes to church!" The script passed the Ed Taste Test… but yknow what he's a guy. So I sought a 3rd opinion from Bittertea. Well, I got the "Yah kewl go for eet! *thumbs up*" Thus emboldened, I went ahead with the script.
But now I think the 3rd opinion was untrustworthy. Cuz now all she does is ask whether I uploaded the pages yet, cackling like Beavis & Butthead, and making jokes about "ragging." Oh well, Ed was okay with it… he goes to church!
Read the companion comic FIGHT 1; both stories take place in the same world.
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