This page by me. This page took a ridiculously long time; I don't know why. I have to start cutting down on the CG… just because I learned more tricks doesn't mean I should be using all of them all the time…
I ran this by a test audience. The biggest problem seems to be panel 5 (the screaming head), in terms of clarity. What I was trying to achieve was… that panel depicts a quick/sudden flashback in Nuada's head. It might have been more understandable if I put it inside a panel, but I was trying something… trying to make the centipedes continuous with panel 5, to show that it is all a continuation of Nuada's thoughts/feelings.
One of the hardest things with this chapter (and half of the last one) is that it's all Nuada; every panel is Nuada. I try hard to mix it up, so that I don't have to draw his face every single panel… But at the same time, his emotions are the centerpiece of the events so I have to draw his face a lot. Argh.
Come back Chase! You're the one I want to draw~!
Read the companion comic FIGHT 1; both stories take place in the same world.
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