You can imagine that Misa would be reluctant to go into the Haven uninvited. Pila's house is one thing, but the elder faelings live in the Haven, and they're a bit intimidating, especially to young faelings like Misa.
I don't like those little thought circles that lead toward her. At first I didn't use any, but I didn't want her thoughts to seem like narration, so I compromised and used a few of them. It probably looks strange, but I hope it's not confusing.
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