If you are wondering, I didn't put the NSFW thing up near the title because, even though there's nudity, the not-safe part is so small and easy to overlook.
In the last panel, I was tempted to put some sort of exasperation lines radiating from Tahve where he's being carried away by the bird, because you can hardly see him, so you'd be sure to know he's there. But instead I decided you'd know what was happening, even if it's hard to make out. I used a much lighter skin tone on him there.
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