I finally finished my uni year! Last exam was day before yesterday. So yeah, that's why there was a delay on this page. I had two big final exams this week. Mostly a bit 'meh' towards this page. It does it's job though. I was unsure about Fortress' '…', but it makes it a more poignant silence than how it looked when I just had her stood there. Beoran's coat is always so hard to draw, 'cause he doesn't wear it like a coat, more like a cloak, with the sleeves just hanging like that. I've been trying to get the older characters to look cool. I don't like how in manga, often older or old people look really weird and wrong, and everybody of any importance is really young. I think that's stupid. You know, I noticed something weird…I draw eyes smaller on close-up shots. Closer to real proportions. Maybe I should look into doing something about that…but in a way, I kind of like it…
SOunds like a "The ends justify the means" type arguements. I definitly like the job you did on the close up of his eyes. It tends to distance yourself from the usual manga style while also looking really cool. I like it. I can definitly see why you would have some difficulty with the jacket, but it turned out great in my opinion. The only thing I notices, is maybe fortress's "…" bubble should've been place closer to her head instead of her knees.
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Login or Registermlai at
I see you're trying new angles while drawing ch. 5.
booger at
love that second panel!
Peipei at
this is so beautiful :3
Tim the Enchanter at
oh Ãâ YAY big monsters :D YAY
Triss at
Yay new page! You make me so happy. Oh, dear. Seems like things aren't going to be going so good for Rocket.
methecello at
Congrats on your exams.
Oooo…interesting! I can't wait to see how this will turn out. I really like the level of suspense? (is that right?)or transition from page to page. :D
snark at
Oooh lots of forebodding in this one
And congratulations on finishing uni ^_^
Tantz_Aerine at
argh! the stakes are being upped! I like this page. It has a broody feeling and Fortress' '…' really does get the silence across.
Well done :)
reidavidson at
So YOU'RE the reason Jesse called Beo "Beoran." XD;;;
I was like "I have heard that name… where have I heard that name…"
XD;;;
Ooooh. *leans forward* This is Rei kind of action. I wanna seeeeee. o.o
Hguyver at
SOunds like a "The ends justify the means" type arguements. I definitly like the job you did on the close up of his eyes. It tends to distance yourself from the usual manga style while also looking really cool. I like it. I can definitly see why you would have some difficulty with the jacket, but it turned out great in my opinion. The only thing I notices, is maybe fortress's "…" bubble should've been place closer to her head instead of her knees.