Fated Feather
03-17: Ass-Kicking Time

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03-17: Ass-Kicking Time

iagojester
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Hey guys, this is my 100th page! I thought I'd never make it!
Two things:
So, this page seems really awkward to me, like it doesn't flow right. I think it might be my attempt at too many non-face-centered shots. If anyone can pinpoint something else, I'd appreciate it.

I've been darkening all my outlines recently- I think it helps differentiate from the background. Anyone disagree?

Commenties:

ThisbeRichard: Yea, we'll get to Kaanis and 'Yote. Never fear. As for Wolfe… mua ha ha ha!!

Winzerella: Yea, you're telling me you don't believe it… imagine my surprise when a scanner arrived! The only problem was that I wasn't home to get it, so they brought it to the school where I worked because I was the only foreigner and they all know where I am at any given time. … evil small towns and my lack of blending in.

ejb: Yea… sorry about that. Malevin is probably more of the more useful characters in that he's sent on a whole bunch of missions for reasons we don't know yet, but he rarely completes them. Why? Stay tunned.

Mina-Lunga: Yea for custard! … I think. Custardy water… Malevin in custard… ew.
Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistake. Can you believe I teach English? Thank God I have a dictionary. And dude… Malevin didn't keep swimming! He got sent back to his "True Time." He's gone!

Wazaga: Aw shucks. Thanks.

Alejkhan + Jenshin: I know, right? I think MinaLunga deserves some big reward or something.





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