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04-15: The Contents of a Box

iagojester

on Jan. 25, 2007

The hands are a little awkward on this page, as is that over-the-head shot, but I'll deal.
The new coat doesn't look different than the last one, but it is. You'll see.
But you won't see for a while because next week is back to the crew.
And on a small bickering point- No one commented that, if one ignored the word bubbles, the first panel of Hawke and Wolfe on the last page could have been a scene from a wedding ceremony. I really wanted ~someone~ to point it out, but sine no one did, I see I have to do it. =P Beh!

Comments:
Ozone Ocean: How can you compare those pages? The first one is all non-contrasty and I typed over it! You can hardly tell I changed anything.
As for sadness… yes and no. She's not really sad to see him go, more like sad to see her answers go. It's like getting really close to a mystery you've been trying to solve all your life and then someone yanks the rug out from under you.

Neriad: Well, the forearm is a bit too long and the fingers were a little boxy, but it got the point across.

Nigellashade: I'm glad the feeling of imcompletess came across solidly. Yea!

Bewinged: I dunno why, but it makes me pretty happy to hear that you re-read it. Sometimes I forget there's a sizable archive there. Glad other people remember. Did it make any more sense the 2nd time through? ^_^

Angel Jargon: Good thing your head is still asking questions, then. And you get your jolly ladies next week. So impatient!

ljs5123: Oh dear Well, thank you for your comment. I'm glad the line work is interesting to you, even though yours is far more refined.

ejb: I should hypothetically have reconstructed a lot more, but I was a little traumatized by my own lack of desire.

Mina Lunga: Emotional ouch. I'll have to remember that one. Hmmm.