Finding the One
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Chapter 1-Page 9
soonmme onRuh-roh! This can only lead to trouble…
EDIT: December 4th 2010, changed some stuff to make for more consistent characterization.
Panel 1 was completely redone, new bg, bigger, more artsy. Dialog added in panel 3, and changed in panel 4 and 5. Repositioned panels 3,4, and 5. Changed a sprite in panel 5, too.
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