Forsaken Doctrine
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forsakendoctrine on#($*@%JEFKJw34)(%$#
Sorry… Had to let that out. The author didn't like the "flow" of the pages since I decided to redo them but in my opinion… The pacing was just dragging out. Any who… I know I said I'd get these out within the week but you know, I say a lot of things. I have to change page 2 since you'll notice that the panel at the top is… well… The same.
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I didn't see this the first time around, but it's darn awesome so far!
mattchee at
Dang! Thats a hardcore lion!
dreamwatcher at
looks like a great start, the pages look really good especially the coloring, keep it up!