Fractions
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Prologue 3
Product Placement onI try to spice up the scenery with lots of angles. That way the boring chit chat won't be so boring.
About the dialog: If redrawn pages of this story were actually made at some point, the hole approach to this scenario will probably be revisited and maybe changed. For example, I am not so sure about the boasting in the first page and would like to change that for something better.
But enough about that. Let's keep on reading…. It looks as if our pilots may have discovered something.
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