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Chapter 13.5.426

LanceDanger

on Sept. 7, 2009

This is actually a remake to page 1 from chapter 5, done from the perspective of Marilyn. Way back (wow, it feels so weird to write "way back"!) in chapter 8, Sandra told Fred Marilyn had seen this particular game, the first time she had seen Fred, so here is that time =3 If you wanna see the original page, go HERE (thanks to DAJB for the code for the links…yes, I read and appreciate ALL of you guys comments, even if for the time being I can't reply like I used to =3)

It's interesting to revisit these scenes and redraw them. Hopefully, these remakes of sort has show at least some minor improvments on my art =3 Anywho, thanks for reading, please look foward to the next update!