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Frogman

on March 8, 2008

I didn't win. :(

EDIT: Ok, time for comments on this page.

I'm really happy with the layout. The binder on Peter's shelf says Litoria Caerulea. That is a hint of things to come if you want to google it.

This page went through so many dialogue rewrites. Originally they were making AFL (Australian Football League) jokes, but I hated that.

I actually forgot to draw the phone in panel 2. A stack of papers was there instead with a paperweight on it. This was after I inked it too, so I had to use my good friend 'white out' to cover the mistake and draw in the phone.

I buggered up panel 3 too, and inked Peter's glasses frames waaaaaay too thick. He looked like a filthy emo.

I'm sad that a lot of the detail of panel 4 is lost. I spent quite some time getting that fridge door to look right, and it's covered with a speech bubble… The lighting in that panel came out perfect though.

Panel 5 was really hard to draw. I had so much trouble with Peter's arms, and they still don't look 100% right to me. Then the background gave me the shits because I had to draw the same amount of blinds as in the last page with Peter.