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Page 02

MMMelody

on April 13, 2009

So, I actually had this page done and colored a month ago, but when I went to look at it, I realized how lazy and crappy looking the background was. Here, see for yourself, haha…

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7651/fsa02linessmdh6.jpg

Needless to say, the new background took all day, but it was sooo worth it. I like the painting style I used, it's gritty. So I think I'm going to go back and add for detail to Page 01 and paint it in a similar manner.

I notice that a lot of western comics generally put a lot more panels on a page than I feel comfortable with. Thus, my story seems to be developing much slower than it probably should. Do my pages seem too sparse to you guys? Any advice?