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VegaX on May 18, 2006
Page 02 continues with a brief run-threw of some of the other occupants of the hotel. They have no real part of THIS tale but they might pop up in future stories. Or not.As said before, i experiment a bit with this comic. Art wise and with color. Using rhymes isn't easy either but hopefully i manage to pull it of somewhat.
at 9:16PM, April 25, 2010
I agree with the last couple of comments. The text seems to lack certain flow. I doesn't feel like a poem.
Apart from that, I'm liking this so far.
at 3:49PM, March 11, 2008
SWEEET!!!! but the rhyming needs work sorry
at 6:24PM, Aug. 13, 2007
the rhyming is a hit or miss I see...the art is very unique...I especially like the twins...
at 10:32AM, July 21, 2007
Loving it so far! The rhymes are great, the narration has a nice, talkative style, which I absolutely love. The artwork's really good, especially the colors,
at 3:06AM, April 8, 2007
well, well, well, nice rhyems
at 6:51AM, Sept. 15, 2006
What is even impressive is that when you scroll and read the passages, it gives a really nice atmposhpere!
at 10:49PM, June 16, 2006
yes, narrative skills he have indeed
at 8:32PM, May 19, 2006
i love this! great style and everything!
at 2:27PM, May 19, 2006
what a uniquely done coloring!
at 2:15PM, May 19, 2006
Nice!! Very poetic... Gave it a Twilight Zone kind of feel.