This page came out pretty nice. I like the mood in it and the text is bitter-sweet.
Honestly, I don't aim for the stories to be confusing, it's just that some images can be interpreted different and isn't always straightforward as in normal panel comics. It might be a bit overly "artsy" but it's more fun that way i think.
The rhyming thing is driving me mad by the way. I'm glad the story is soon over. :)
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