Now, the initial idea was that Henry just barricaded himself in the projector booth with the twin sisters trying to break down the door, but it just felt like this story needed some blood and death to spice things up.
I suddenly noticed with this page that somewhere along the line that the art in this story has become very cartoony. I didn't plan it but i think it kinda works.
to me the creepiest thing of this page is seeing the sisters actually scared, in contrast with that angry face they had since this story started. Awesome chars man
I don't notice the cartooniness you mention. But, I think the coloring could be a bit more dramatic to go along with the story, and the climax at this part. Otherwise, I think its progressing wonderfully. I can't wait to read more.
It does work, and this extreme reaction shows just how unhinged Henry has become. Very interesting. Does the surviving twin try to break down the door or will she go flying for the police?
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to me the creepiest thing of this page is seeing the sisters actually scared, in contrast with that angry face they had since this story started. Awesome chars man
Nicol3 at
Hey, with annoying managers like that.. SOMEONE had to go.
Hooray for spicy 'ol blood and GUTS!
HybridLemonade at
I don't notice the cartooniness you mention. But, I think the coloring could be a bit more dramatic to go along with the story, and the climax at this part.
Otherwise, I think its progressing wonderfully. I can't wait to read more.
Tantz_Aerine at
It does work, and this extreme reaction shows just how unhinged Henry has become. Very interesting. Does the surviving twin try to break down the door or will she go flying for the police?
Darwin at
Wow all that for a ghost in a projector? WOOF!