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PhatScurl onFINALLY IM DONETH!!!
With the intense amounts of work and procrastination that was need for this comic, i thought i'd never get it out.
…so yea, sorry for the long wait. Ive just been really bored, and not in the mood for drawing. Christmas break is coming up so im going to TRY to get a schedule going, maybe a comic every 2 weeks.
now i shall critique my own comic.
This one is about a 3/5 for me. I can find several things i could have and should have done better. The Josh and Kyle in the first panel are just really disproportional. Kyle in the 3rd block came out a little to sketch. And i really think i could have done better with the coloring. I need to start practicing more with the markers.
One of the major things i did for this comic was have Kyle smile. I was beginning to think you might be of the idea that he is mad or just permanently pissed off, but that's not true. Kyle is a very private person, but perfectly happy with it, he just likes to get away from people. It is the exact opposite for Josh, but that's what makes them such great friends.
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