Green Rain

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Aereis

on May 2, 2011

So many things to say…
1. I tried NOT outlining the speech bubbles and the red diamond thing at the bottom (which I'll get to in a minute). Why? Not sure. I had a reason when I decided to do it, but now I forget. I kind of like it though, as the bubbles seem less obstrusive now.
2. I made the text of said speech bubbles smaller. Hopefully you can still read my writing. It was just too big before, wasn't it?
3. The red blob in the last panel is supposed to be a red diamond looking gem. I had the wonderful idea that by not outlining each contour it would look better. It doesn't. It looks like a pointy red and pink blob.
4. My scanner sucks. The white haired girl in the last panel lost a lot of detail in her hair and dress. I might re-scan on different settings and paste it in at some point.