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Such a Distracted Guy....

Bluesox

on March 17, 2010

Hey! here it is… I thought I should write down what happens for ya'll so ya don't have to play my mean guessing game….

Guy: *pulls out sword and electrifies it* evil look in eye
Luelon: *Breathing hard with arms smoking from shooting lightning*
Rosselia: LUELOOOON!!! *sound fading away* Rosselia has tear falling down her cheek
Guy runs at Luelon and slashes his face.
Luelon stands in horror with hand over face…

-I need some input-
Does bolding the panels and speech bubbles help? or does it make it distracting? Should I keep it?

P.S.
I put on a new comic thingy I made for my writting asignment.. But it's only 3 pages.. still.. you check it out.. http://www.drunkduck.com/Everlasting_Light/index.php?p=681595