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Payback....
Bluesox on Sorry about the sloppiness… I split my finger open and it hasn't healed all the way yet.. >_< …. Ok, so I think I should explain what Luelon is doing..
In the first panel he's dodging him, then next he spins around *jumping behind him* , then last, after he jumps behind him slashing him with his sword.. last panel the guy *name hidden until further notice* in on the ground in pain…
Anyway… Pls comment.. I need pointers.. Any ideas on how I can make it look better? I promise I'm getting a better sytem for this comic soon…
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