Hills Like White Elephants
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Bico onAs anyone who has read the short story will notice, I've kinda jumped in half a page or so into the story. The reason is twofold. One, I felt that much of the conversation was arbitrary and redundant, which works for prose, but, as they say, a picture is already worth a thousand words, so much of the dialogue is unnecessary in this. Two, I had three days to finish this and I didn't want to have twice as many pages to draw.
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