As for this page, I'm pleased with how much better it seems in comparison to the previous days. Looking back, I could have used a bigger brush for the face in the second panel; with smaller figures, as this page features, there's no need for overly large brushes except to paint larger portions of the landscape faster, if that at all.
A qualm: there might be a confusion as to the many lines used, and a simplification of the line work for future pages is in order.
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