this page makes me feel, blah. The layout's bland and the conversation doesn't flow. Plus the shadow thing on Tddy's face in the bottom pannel didn't quite work out. Part of the text folw problem is that's I'm still getting used to writing for Teddy, and he's a bit choppy with his speach, but mostly it's that I have a heavy workload right now, so I don't have the time I would like to fine-tune everything. I should have more time for the next page, and I hope I can make it turn out better.
I'm trying out new font now. I'm not so sure I like the all caps thing this one's got going. What do you all think?
responses (I think I'll keep replying this way since it's easier for you guys to see 'em)
re Cool Fire Bird: don't worry, I don't comment as often as I should on other people's comic's, so I can't realy complain. I'm just glad that you like it.
re Arrijas: don't worry, that's just what I plan to do.
re Leyote: *giggle* I'm going to have to attempt to draw that sometime.
re Ninja_Jette: whenever I come back from vacation it's always all "oh boy, not I have a bunch of pages I can read"
re Nigellashade: Teddy's the sort of person who just wants to fade into the background. he probably wouldn't have said anything at all and never let them know that he was awake if he didn't feel that he owed Joan an appology.
re Delta_end64: Teddy's good at listening on the sidelines.
re Holyknight: yeah, that happens from time to time.
re pv_chan: low budget dragon slaying: take a cow or sheep skin, stuff it with peat, and arange it to look like the animal. a dragon will come along and eat it, and then the peat will ignite and the dragon will explode. tada! problem solved.
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