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pg 198

daidaishar

on Sept. 7, 2007

holy flaming flamingos batman! it's establishing shots!

dialouge and explanations iminent. awkward silence for now. I was temped to add in a ticking wall clock, but I didn't think that one would weather bumpy travel all that well.

Yes, they are inside a wagon and it's all cramped and low, but that's how wagons are. Despite that, it's a rather nice wagon, because unlike out times, the HF gypsies are fairly well off financialy because solifidians show them favor and alow then to travel through their lands. wonderful for exclusive trade routes. This is the front half of the wagon, the seccond is behind the curtain and has the sleeping quarters.

replies:
re Tali_demonic: poor Ted's mum is already gone anyways, so his dad's going to have to step up.

re Rina_ran: very awkward…

re The_RaiViaN: thanks ^_^

re Mina_Lunga: I'll have to pay more attention to that in the future.

re Racnarath: we'll have to see…

re Kikaru: unfortunatly it's a term that seems to have worked it's way fairly solidly into our vocab. I'm probably going to continue using it simply for clarity's

re worstcase : yup, he's mentioned him a few times in passing during exposition bits.

re N o v a: hurah!

re Cheeko: we shall have to see how things go.

re jiminycricketX: poor old Tedders.

re ce33: indeed.

re Kikaru: you might be right, saying them, they sound almost interchangable.

re Will: glad you like it, even if it didn't surprise you.

re Hguyver: indeed you do. For instance, today i learned that they would sometimes formally execute animals like pigs in pre-revolution France.
re PaniK:hurah for edumacation!