I Bruise Easily

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Ch1 Pg 2 (restart)

yukiyoma

on Sept. 22, 2008

Sorry, I meant to have this up for yesterday but I got really busy with doctor's appointments and stuff. D: plus I'm having a hard time finding a job. If I don't find one then I'll have to put IBE on another hiatus because I won't be able to afford paper/markers. *sighs* and my scanner from school eats the lighter shades so you can't see that the dress and the bg for the 4th panel are actually pale grey.

I think my art has really improved since I started… well sort of at least. take a look at chapter 1 page 5 then at page one of the redo, Terra Rose looks like a human size, not like Barbie! Beverly also has some real (not just boob) weight on her here…. at least I think so.

Beverly is in a sari (I hope I spelled that right is it sari or saree? because I love that fashion. The elf with her is in a more greek type dress as you will see in a few pages.) The elf's name is Selest (S not C :) ) and she is Beverly's girlfriend. Originally she was an ex but her character was better written than Timothy's and she adds more drama than he did so I'm adding her in instead of him. The last panel holds a serious looking character you should all remember from page 3 of chapter 1 before. I know I said I didn't want to wuss out on the art but I couldn't help making Beverly chibi, I loved the "I don't wanna be a lady" from the previous version of the story. I really enjoy this page, even with it's numerous mistakes. I think I'll draw a pretty picture of the winner of the favourite character poll on the blog… so far only 2 votes have been cast so it's a tie. I should *fingers crossed) have more done before the end of the week, the author and I have to go over my thumbnails to make sure they are to his approval.