Author notes

Issue 4 page 5

bravo1102

on Nov. 24, 2013

Just action.  Montinez backed up against door the across the corridor.  I managed to cobble together a few more pages out of the existing pictures so the updates will continue for another week.

I also finished the ocmplete rewrite of the script, fixed some holes and tightened up the ending.  The original script just went on too many pages and had an unsatisfacotry conclusion.  The climatic batle scene wasn't as climatic as I wanted and there were some continuity issues.  Per Banes' suggestion the climatic battle scene will take place in total darkness… but seen through night vision.