Jeremie

Episode One - Page 15

on July 25, 2010

Yumtri was originally going to say 'Now you listen to ME, Mor-on.' but after I discussed this with an online friend of mine, we both agreed that this would've made Yumtri sound like an obnoxious jerk. So a much milder term was used instead, which still preserves the original subtle animostity towards Qule in general without making him a complete jerk.

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