Jovian

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Book 1, Page 25

RobertRVeith

on Dec. 30, 2020

In a textbook 3-act-structure story, at the exact midpoint of the narrative, someone will say, "We need to come up with a plan." This is that moment.

"You don't want to get mixed up with what's happening on Frigga." That's a story I hope to get around to telling. I slotted it as episode four, but at the rate I'm churning out pages, that's years from now.

Also, note that figure in the upper left corner of the first panel. I'm a bit of a Hergé nerd and I loved how he often introduced characters by putting them in the background of a scene, but not really calling attention to them. Then, when they become a part of the story, the reader is thinking, "Didn't I see that one somewhere before?" I'm not saying that's what I'm doing here but… oh, who am I kidding? Of course that's what I'm doing here.