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Page 13: issue 4 - A Saucerful of Secrets

shastab24

on April 19, 2012

Yep, I'm wrapping the issue up.  One more page after this.  The funny thing is that I didn't set out to have my issues last about the same amount of pages.  It's just happened that way.
 
Eiderdown's Spanish on this page would probably give a native speaker a headache.  It's the problem with Babelfish.  I just couldn't reword it.  It was supposed to happen earlier, but I put a joke about "telekinetic thrust" and saved the page without an ability to edit properly before I remembered about my plans.  This issue was drawn with concepts in mind and not an actual script (unlike the previous three) and so I kind of forgot my intentions at times with the panels.  But what is she saying?  If I get enough questions, I'll say.  It does pertain to her character, and I do consider it worthwhile to know about her, but it is a bit too risque for a T rating (maybe), which was why I put it in Spanish.  However, if I actually knew Spanish, I might have made it more understandable.
 
Tomorrow: Wrapping up the issue